St3lf's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Seeds(1)]

wow mesmay :O

this is Fitzy from SPP :) i hadnt seen this till now. this is awesome, it seems quite dark but has an awesome atmosphere, it says seeds(1) so is there going to be more?

anyway great job, all the effects were great (the bio bot stabbing the other one at the end was amazing!) and the animation was great, fantastic job :D

Mesmay responds:

this means a lot from you, thanks =3

[TLTFT 2008 Round 6 Collab]

haha

tawniks was AWESOME, that alone deserves a high score. mesmays was cool too and drifts was great. just tawniks was hilarious and well animated...why didnt he get a higher score?

TeamXHawk responds:

Because the decapitation itself didn't look that good.

[OMG Racism!!!1]

decent

hey, not bad, but i prefered the elastic guys one. i dunno why. i thought the movements just wern't as good in this, especially the running. i mean i know you SAID its a style and that all us animators do the same stuff...but really your running and walking just looks poorly done.

i mean, you said in a comment on a review that you wanted to make the punches realistic...and generally if your gonna make realistic punches your walking should be realistic. i just think some of your movements need some work. especially the walking.

but looking past that it was pretty decent, i didnt think it was choppy or anything and the fights were decent. i liked the way it wasnt a normal ending and that the orange guy died :D. and overall athough it was short it was fairly entertaining and it looked like you had fun making it.

anyway if you just get the walking and some other movements improved i think it would really add to your animations. and seriously, we dont all just copy terkoizes style or anything, you can have a unique style whilst keeping good movements, my brush animations have a style that i havnt seen before and people like cosmoseth have totally different styles...yet they all have good movements. and i think thats what tman was trying to tell you.

anyway good job on the animation and i hope to see you make more :D

DikkopStudios responds:

Movement. Ok. Thanks for the advice dude. This time I wanted to make an animation with a little story, unlike the previous one. Actually I started animating it no knowing where I would end. Yes, it was fun to make :D
What I'm trying to say about the Terkoiz style stealing, not just his style, others too. It's hard to explain, so I won't :))

I will make more!!!!!! You 2?

[Battle Arenas 1 RM Collab]

not bad

byonds was easily the highest quality. his part was too short but awesome.

negadrains was well done... a few flaws but the length made it good

orbbs sucked. shorter than both the other 2, and far worse quality. if you're gonna half ass something you shouldnt do it at all...especially if its gonna easily be the worst thing in the collab and possibly cost it some points.

good job on it all together though.

TeamXHawk responds:

Didn't anyone observe SSJBryando's part ?!

Anyways, thanks for the review.

[Elastic Guys]

very good

DEFINATELY your best movie yet. its well done, the movements were good, the action was exciting and the elastication was very well executed and well eased. i felt that each hit had good force, and the sounds added were fitting. oh and the background was pretty good too. there was improvement from the starting movements, and they got better as time went on, which also resulted in better action.

besides the length there isnt much i can complain about in this movie, although more use of the environment would be nice to see so maybe keep that in mind for next time. but this is a world of difference from your last animation, and this time i think its deserving of a 3.67 score. so well done and good job on the daily 3rd. and please dont take my score of 7 as bad. its very good, but if you made it longer and stuff it would be deserving of a higher score. i just dont think its quite deserving of higher at the moment, mostly because of length. but like i said more environment usage would be good too.

also, what happened to that other animation you were making with like blue bad guys and stuff?

anyway good job on the movie, i enjoyed it.
//st3lf

DikkopStudios responds:

Hey man thanks so much.
I stopped working on the other animation because I was addicted to so games (lol) and I didn't feel like animating. But some weekend I made this and it came out well. It started as a test (which it still is, no story, shortness etc) and I just submitted it cuz I didn't know what the next move would be.
Because of this gigantically positive responce I got alot of ideas to work on that movie again and it will service all your needs of what u missed in this one.
Thanks again dude :D

[The Ceiling]

hehe

i like the bit where the other guy came in and said he got in through the door...and i thought it was clever in the way that by then the big box type thing was blocking it.

but it was too short and the animation kinda left alot to be desired, but good job anyways :)

DikkopStudios responds:

You like giving people a bad score? What u say is true, but stop reviewing my things if u don't like them

[Fast Guys]

not too bad...

it was okay...just okay. not good, not terrible. basically, it was just blurrs flying around...blurs flying around does not make a good animation. i'd like to see a proper fight, proper fight moves...at the moment its just monotonous and boring...and also seems lazy in that theres not much animation involved other than blurrs flying about. you made it in one day...that says alot about it. im wondering how it got a score of 3.6. because in all honesty i dont think it deserves it...but sure, its better than some stuff here on NG anyways, so at least thats a plus...but spend some time on something (a few months) and make it some good length, and make it interesting. because im sure then it will be worth watching, whilst what it is at the moment...is fairly uninteresting.

DikkopStudios responds:

It has such a high score cuz I vote on it every day to get my exp
And that mountain of words doesn't help me at all cuz I animate way differently now.